Monday, 19 August 2013

As the apple fell

 

I came across a blog that has a weekly prompt for writers. All you have to do is keep within 100 words. I thought that's intresting and gave it a go. The prompt was 'As the Apple fell.' I tried to submit it to the site but all submissions are now closed. It would be a shame to wast it so please find below a very very short story.

Enjoy.

As the Apple fell, I mean thats all it took just one moment. I moved, she moved. Her hand brushed mine as we moved to catch it. Our eyes met over the Granny Smiths. Her’s green, mine steel Blue.

‘Wow your fast.’ I said as her long dark hair was falling back into place.

‘No problem, I just kind of reacted.’

She placed the apple in my hand and held it there. I placed my hand on hers.

She caressed mine with her thumb.

‘Would you like to go for a coffee? or some fruit maybe?’ I asked.

All this because the Apple fell.

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